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Email too passive fix

Passive wording makes a request easier to miss. Clearer wording gets the next step across faster.

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Quick explanation

Use the rewrite tool to turn hesitant language into a clearer draft. Compare this page with Rewrite email to sound professional and How it works if you want the full flow. Then move the clearer version into the generator.

This can lower your reply rate. Short emails that leave out context get ignored, and long ones get skimmed.

Examples

What passive emails look like before the rewrite

Too passive

I was just wondering if maybe you could send the revised deck when you get a chance. The reader can skip the request.

Clearer

Could you send the revised deck by Friday? The action is easy to see.

Hesitant

If possible, I was wondering if you might maybe review the notes before the call. The ask is buried.

Direct

Could you review the notes before the call and send any updates by Thursday? Clear and easy to reply to.

Common mistakes

Watch for these traps

Too much hedging

Makes the request sound unsure and easy to ignore.

No clear next step

Leaves the reader guessing what to do next.

Long setup

Delays the ask and weakens the reply.

What works

This is what clear emails actually do:

These emails are easier to scan:

Turn soft requests into clear next steps.
Remove filler words that do not change the meaning.
Keep the request near the top of the draft.
Make the reader's reply obvious.

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