Email rewrite insights
Email too passive fix
Passive wording makes a request easier to miss. Clearer wording gets the next step across faster.
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Use the rewrite tool to turn hesitant language into a clearer draft. Compare this page with Rewrite email to sound professional and How it works if you want the full flow. Then move the clearer version into the generator.
Shorter emails are easier to scan, easier to reply to, and easier to send with confidence.
Examples
What passive emails look like before the rewrite
Too passive
I was just wondering if maybe you could send the revised deck when you get a chance. The reader can skip the request.
Clearer
Could you send the revised deck by Friday? The action is easy to see.
Hesitant
If possible, I was wondering if you might maybe review the notes before the call. The ask is buried.
Direct
Could you review the notes before the call and send any updates by Thursday? Clear and easy to reply to.
Common mistakes
Watch for these traps
Too much hedging
Makes the request sound unsure and easy to ignore.
No clear next step
Leaves the reader guessing what to do next.
Long setup
Delays the ask and weakens the reply.
What works
This is what clear emails actually do:
These emails are easier to scan:
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